Awww, how cute~! I love how sweetly he is curled around her. :"3 <3 They are such an adorable couple... Obviously their little sleepover has not been authorized, but of course Mr. J gets whatever he wants! XD I love it. :"3
Haha, that definitely would have added something completely different to it. XD It would have made it more of a comedy piece than a romance, so depending on the viewpoint, it could be better or worse. Either way, I know I would have adored it. Great job!